So I’m writing a graphic novel. Its called The Omni Knight. Its a series about a detective who turns into a superhero. Its my twist on a superhero like Batman or Iron man. But instead I add the element of clues and puzzles. About a detective named Red Burnes. His grandparents took him in when he was at age 8. His grandfather is a descendent of one of the Knights of the round table. So this story is pretty much like Knights of the round table but in the future with twists and suspense and gadgets. The pictures I’m showing you are from my partner who I’m working with on this project. I’m the writer and he’s the artist. The art is going to be comic style drawings. But here’s a small intro of the villain the Alchemist. Crazy scientist. Wrote a small sample of what this character is going to be like. Let me know what you think.
Dr. Stain / The Alchemist
Deception + despair + destruction = the rebirth of a new society. For it is the world’s destiny. A new age will rise. An age where the mind controls all. An evolution of Science. This earth is poisoned by emotions and weakness. We will evolve to a new kind of infra structure. Where steel meets bone. Where computers meet the cerebral. Power is worthless without strength and intelligence. For life needs a new call. But first we must deceive those with fear. Fear for their life. They must know what fear is. Only fear makes one stronger. Then there will be despair. Despair of those we love taken from arms of each other. Watching them suffer will cause pain and revenge. Revenge is what strikes a man with madness. It strengthens his core. It’s what makes him invincible. And last there will be destruction. For a new world to begin. The old must perish and be history. Before a transformation there must be a destruction. Destroy all who stand in the way of the rebirth of life. That is our destiny.



I’m really impressed with your writing. You have a great talent. 🙂
Wonderful!
Thank you. I’m planning to make a series for this story. It’s a big project but it will be worth it in the end. If
you ever want to learn more about this story I’ll send you my outline on this story.